quality email

hello everyone this week we had to explain on a slideshow or google drawing how to write a quality email is this is my work hope you like it! learning intention: identify key words which when combined with prior knowledge, will help with understanding



is this a good explanation?

ALMA chunk 4

hello every one this week me and my writing group had to write a chunk out of the short film called Alma. please read it down below.

Chunk 4                     ALMA    Alma was furious and angry. She picked up a snowball and chucked it with rage at the door. Then strangely, the door creaked open and she walked in slowly and looked around to see 1,000 eyes around her. Should she really go in alone? What would happen to her if she did?