this week in writing we wrote Haiku poem, mine was about the night sky and the milky way. the work is down below enjoy.
have you ever seen the night sky?
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this week in writing we wrote Haiku poem, mine was about the night sky and the milky way. the work is down below enjoy.
have you ever seen the night sky?
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Love it, you did that so easily too
ReplyDeleteHi Louis
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the haiku poem! Did it take you long to write the poem? Sometimes it can be challenging to make sure you have the correct amount of syllables per line. Yes I have seen the night sky, what made you write about that?
Miss Henderson